Comments on: SD 1 http://sweetsong.wordpress.com What IS the real world? Fri, 18 Dec 2009 04:07:59 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: SweetSong http://sweetsong.wordpress.com/sd/#comment-22 SweetSong Thu, 05 Apr 2007 21:47:11 +0000 http://sweetsong.wordpress.com/sd/#comment-22 The Queenclaw is just the Queen, their ruler. She just has a special name. I thought it cool at the time (still do. ^_^;) I actually used to have a prologue, but it had a bunch of horrible stuff in it and I scrapped it as a result. I guess I need a new one. It did explain that there are two sides in this war - Queenclaw Aviara heading one side, with the High Priest Dasdar at the other. There are three gods: Khastarendross (good), Khellendross (neutral - the name will likely change in the rewrite though) and Dasdar (evil). Nope, Taj is a she. Always. XD Can you point the confusion places out to me so I can fix them, please? Thankies for the review. ^_^ (And your writing style is cool. I read a bunch more in that one story. Exciting! ^_^) The Queenclaw is just the Queen, their ruler. She just has a special name. I thought it cool at the time (still do. ^_^;)
I actually used to have a prologue, but it had a bunch of horrible stuff in it and I scrapped it as a result. I guess I need a new one. It did explain that there are two sides in this war – Queenclaw Aviara heading one side, with the High Priest Dasdar at the other. There are three gods: Khastarendross (good), Khellendross (neutral – the name will likely change in the rewrite though) and Dasdar (evil).
Nope, Taj is a she. Always. XD Can you point the confusion places out to me so I can fix them, please?
Thankies for the review. ^_^
(And your writing style is cool. I read a bunch more in that one story. Exciting! ^_^)

]]> By: Sarika http://sweetsong.wordpress.com/sd/#comment-21 Sarika Thu, 05 Apr 2007 21:33:00 +0000 http://sweetsong.wordpress.com/sd/#comment-21 Hi!! I finally read it all... 'cept I'm sitting with my laptop in front of a window and the glare of my computer screen is terrible. So I'll probably have to read it again. I might ask you to explain the general plot to me? Teehee. Like all the Queenclaw and God things? I was a little confused at first at all the characters because there were lots of mentionings of "he" and "she" and I thought the main character was a woman... and then a man... Comments? I like the fast-pacing and your skill at writing fantasy that doesn't sound too archaic (like me *_*- and my stuff has little of the action and magic that yours has). I wish I could narrate fight scenes and things like that. Hope I'm being helpful! Ignore all typos here :P- Sarika Hi!! I finally read it all… ‘cept I’m sitting with my laptop in front of a window and the glare of my computer screen is terrible. So I’ll probably have to read it again.

I might ask you to explain the general plot to me? Teehee. Like all the Queenclaw and God things? I was a little confused at first at all the characters because there were lots of mentionings of “he” and “she” and I thought the main character was a woman… and then a man…

Comments? I like the fast-pacing and your skill at writing fantasy that doesn’t sound too archaic (like me *_*- and my stuff has little of the action and magic that yours has). I wish I could narrate fight scenes and things like that. Hope I’m being helpful! Ignore all typos here :P- Sarika

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